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The Shadows of Cabot Trail

  


Chapter 1

The Cabot Trail in Nova Scotia was known for its breathtaking views—rolling green hills, jagged cliffs, and the endless, churning Atlantic below. But as Jim Carter drove his old pickup along the winding road, he couldn’t shake the feeling that something was watching him from the trees.

The sun had begun its slow descent, painting the sky in hues of orange and purple. It should have been beautiful, but the creeping fog dulled the colors, turning them sickly and gray. Jim tightened his grip on the steering wheel. He hadn’t seen another car in over an hour.

The radio crackled with static. He twisted the dial, but no stations came through—just that same hissing white noise, like distant whispers. He turned it off. Silence was better.

His headlights flickered. Jim frowned. The truck was old, but reliable. He tapped the dashboard. "Don’t do this now," he muttered.

The fog thickened, curling over the road like ghostly fingers. He slowed the truck, squinting through the windshield. The trees lining the road seemed to lean inward, their branches clawing at the air.

A shape darted across the road. Jim slammed the brakes. The truck skidded, tires screeching against the asphalt. His heart pounded as he scanned the road. Nothing.

"Just a deer," he told himself, though it hadn’t looked like any deer he’d ever seen. Too tall. Too thin.

He exhaled shakily and pressed the gas again. The truck rolled forward, but the fog was worse now, swallowing the road whole. He could barely see ten feet ahead.

Then—a figure. Standing in the middle of the road.

Jim’s breath caught. A person? No. The shape was wrong. Too elongated, limbs too spindly. It stood perfectly still, facing him.

He swerved. The truck lurched off the road, tires kicking up gravel as he skidded to a stop just shy of the tree line.

His chest heaved. He looked back at the road. The figure was gone.

"What the hell…?"

The fog shifted, swirling unnaturally, as if alive.

A knock on the passenger window made him jump. A woman stood outside, her face pale, her dark hair damp from the mist.

Jim hesitated, then rolled the window down a crack. "You okay?" he asked.

"My car broke down," she said, her voice soft. "Can I get a ride?"

Something about her sent a chill down his spine. Her eyes were too dark, her smile too still.

"Uh… sure," he said, against his better judgment. He unlocked the door.

She slid into the seat, bringing with her the scent of damp earth and something metallic.

"Thanks," she said. "Not many people come this way at night."

Jim forced a nod. "Where you headed?"

"Just up the road." She pointed ahead, though the fog obscured everything.

He swallowed and put the truck in drive. The engine sputtered.

The woman turned her head slowly, watching him. "You feel it too, don’t you?"

"Feel what?"

"The Trail doesn’t like visitors after dark."

Jim’s hands tightened on the wheel. "What’s that supposed to mean?"

She didn’t answer. Outside, the trees seemed to press closer.

The radio turned on by itself. That same static. That same whispering.

Jim reached to shut it off, but the woman grabbed his wrist. Her fingers were ice-cold.

"Don’t," she said. "They’re talking to you."

His pulse spiked. "Who is?"

Her lips curled into a smile that didn’t reach her eyes. "The ones who live here."

The truck’s headlights flickered again—then died.

Darkness swallowed them whole.

Jim’s breath came in short gasps. "This isn’t funny."

The woman leaned closer. "Who said I was joking?"

Outside, something scraped against the truck’s metal siding.

Then again.

And again.

Like claws.

Jim’s blood turned to ice.

The whispers on the radio grew louder.

The woman’s head tilted at an unnatural angle. "They’re here."

The truck rocked violently.

Jim screamed.

The last thing he saw before the windows shattered was the woman’s grin splitting wider—too wide—as the shadows reached inside.


Chapter 2

The crash of glass was the last thing Jim remembered before blacking out. When he came to, the truck was still, the air thick with the scent of pine and something rancid.

His head throbbed. Blood trickled from a gash on his forehead, warm and sticky. He wiped it away with a shaky hand and looked around.

The passenger seat was empty. The woman was gone.

But the door was still closed.

A cold knot formed in his stomach. She couldn’t have just vanished.

Outside, the fog had lifted slightly, revealing the silhouettes of the trees—tall, skeletal things that swayed despite the lack of wind.

Jim fumbled for his phone. No signal. Of course.

He reached for the ignition. The truck sputtered but didn’t start.

“Come on,” he growled, turning the key again. Nothing.

A sound from outside made him freeze.

Scratching.

Slow. Deliberate. Dragging along the passenger side door.

His breath hitched. He didn’t want to look. But he had to.

He turned his head.

A face pressed against the window.

Pale. Sunken. Eyes black as tar.

Jim recoiled, slamming his back against the driver’s side door.

The thing outside tilted its head, studying him. Its mouth stretched into a grin—too many teeth, jagged and yellow.

Then it knocked.

Three slow, deliberate raps against the glass.

Jim’s pulse roared in his ears.

(22) The thing leaned closer, its breath fogging the window. It whispered something, voice like dry leaves scraping against stone.

“Let us in.”

Jim’s hands flew to the door lock, slamming it down.

The creature’s grin widened.

Then another knock came—from the roof.

Then another. From the hood.

They were surrounding him.

The radio crackled to life again, the static forming words this time—a chorus of hollow voices.

“We see you.”

Jim’s breath came in short, panicked bursts. He needed to run. Now.

He grabbed the flashlight from the glove compartment and kicked open the driver’s side door.

Cold air rushed in, carrying the stench of rot.

He bolted into the trees, branches whipping at his face, roots snagging his feet.

Behind him, the things moved—not running, but gliding, their limbs too long, their movements too smooth.

The forest was alive with whispers.

“Stay.”

“Join us.”

Jim’s lungs burned. He didn’t dare look back.

Then—light.

A cabin. Small, weathered, but with a flickering lantern on the porch.

Hope surged in his chest. He sprinted toward it, his legs threatening to give out.

He crashed onto the porch, fists pounding against the door.

“Please! Help me!”

Silence.

Then, the creak of floorboards.

The door opened.

An old man stood there, his face lined with age, his eyes sharp. He took one look at Jim and grabbed his arm, yanking him inside.

The door slammed shut. A lock clicked.

Outside, the whispers grew louder.

The old man didn’t let go. “You shouldn’t be out there after dark.”

Jim gasped for air. “What—what are they?”

The man’s grip tightened. “The Hollow Ones. They’ve been here longer than the trees.”

A thud against the door made them both flinch.

The lantern flickered.

Then went out.


Chapter 3

The darkness inside the cabin was absolute. Jim’s breath came in ragged gasps as the old man’s grip on his arm tightened like a vise.

Outside, the whispers had stopped.

That was worse.

“They’re waiting,” the old man muttered, his voice low and gravelly. He released Jim and moved through the blackness with unsettling ease.

A match struck. The sudden flare of light made Jim flinch. The old man’s face flickered in the glow as he lit an oil lamp, casting long, dancing shadows across the cramped cabin.

The walls were covered in strange markings—crude symbols carved into the wood, some so old they had darkened with age.

“Who are you?” Jim demanded, his voice shaking.

The man didn’t answer at first. He adjusted the lamp’s flame, then turned to a rusted woodstove in the corner. “Name’s Bill,” he said finally. “And you’re either the luckiest damn fool alive or the unluckiest.”

Jim swallowed hard. “Those things out there—”

“They ain’t things,” Bill interrupted sharply. “They’re what’s left.”

A cold draft seeped through the cabin’s walls, making the lamp’s flame shudder.

Bill tossed a log into the stove. “You ever hear the stories about this place?”

Jim shook his head.

Bill let out a humorless chuckle. “Figures. Tourists never do.” He wiped his hands on his worn flannel shirt. “Cabot Trail’s old. Older than the roads. Older than the towns. And some places… they remember.”

A branch scraped against the roof. Jim’s head jerked up.

Bill didn’t react. “Back in the old days, the Mi’kmaq called this stretch Kespe’kewey—‘the land of the dead.’ They knew better than to travel it at night.”

Jim’s skin prickled. “Why?”

The old man’s eyes flicked to the door. “Because the dead don’t like being watched.”

A sudden thump against the side of the cabin made Jim jump.

Bill sighed, as if annoyed. He reached under the table and pulled out a long, wicked-looking hunting knife.

“They’re getting bold,” he muttered.

Jim’s mouth went dry. “What do they want?”

Bill tested the blade with his thumb. “Same thing they always want. More.”

The scratching started again—this time on all sides of the cabin. Slow. Deliberate.

Then, a voice.

“Jim…”

It sounded like his mother.

Jim’s breath caught. No. Impossible.

Bill’s head snapped toward him. “Don’t answer. Don’t even think about them.”

But it was too late. The voice came again, closer now.

“Jim… it’s so cold out here…”

Tears pricked his eyes. His mother had been dead for ten years.

Bill grabbed his shoulder, fingers digging in hard enough to bruise. “Listen to me. Those aren’t voices. They’re echoes. Things that got left behind.”

The scratching turned into pounding.

The door rattled in its frame.

The symbols on the walls seemed to pulse in the lamplight.

Bill moved to the center of the room and knelt, pressing his palm against the floorboards. “They’re in the ground,” he said quietly. “In the trees. In the damn air.”

A window shattered.

Cold wind rushed in, extinguishing the lamp.

Darkness swallowed them again.

Jim heard Bill stand, heard the knife’s blade scrape against wood as it dragged along the floor.

Then, a new sound—something wet and tearing, like meat being peeled from bone.

A choked gasp.

Bill’s voice, strained: “Run.”

Jim didn’t hesitate.

He bolted for the back door, crashing through it into the freezing night.

Behind him, the cabin groaned—then collapsed inward with a sound like a dying animal.

He didn’t look back.

The trees closed around him as he ran, their branches clawing at his clothes.

The whispers returned, louder now.

“Stay with us.”

“Stay forever.”

His foot caught on a root.

He fell hard, pain exploding through his ribs.

When he rolled onto his back, he saw them—

Dozens of pale figures standing among the trees, watching.

Waiting.

The woman from the road stepped forward, her smile stretching impossibly wide.

“You should have let us in,” she whispered.

Jim screamed—

And the shadows rushed forward.


Chapter 4

Consciousness returned in fragments—cold air against his skin, the smell of damp earth, the distant sound of waves crashing against cliffs.

Jim’s eyelids fluttered open.

He was no longer in the forest.

Gray stone walls surrounded him, slick with moisture. A single rusted iron gate stood at one end of the chamber, its bars twisted like old bones.

His wrists burned. He looked down—thick ropes bound his arms to a wooden chair, the fibers digging into his flesh.

No. Not ropes.

Hair. Long, knotted strands of human hair, woven into cords.

His stomach lurched.

“Bill?” His voice echoed weakly. Only silence answered.

Then—a whisper of movement behind him.

A hand touched his shoulder.

Jim jerked violently against his restraints.

The woman from the road stepped into view, her dark eyes reflecting the dim light of a single oil lamp hanging from the ceiling.

“You’re awake.” Her voice was different now—less human. A chorus of tones layered beneath it, like many speaking as one.

“What the hell are you?” Jim spat.

She tilted her head, considering him. “We are the Keepers. The Watchers. The Ones Who Walk the Fog.”

The lamp flickered. Shadows danced across the walls—too many shadows, moving independently of the light.

“You killed Bill.”

Her lips curled. “Bill was old. His time had come.”

A scraping sound came from the darkness beyond the gate. Something large shifted in the blackness.

The woman’s smile widened. “But you? You’re new.”

The gate groaned open.

Figures emerged—dozens of them, their bodies emaciated, their skin stretched tight over protruding bones. Their eyes were hollow pits, their mouths sewn shut with coarse black thread.

They moved in perfect unison, forming a circle around Jim’s chair.

The woman produced a bone needle from her sleeve, its tip blackened with age.

“Every road needs its toll,” she murmured.

Jim thrashed as the first Hollow One reached for his face. Cold fingers pried his jaw open.

The needle glinted in the lamplight.

Then—

A gunshot rang out.

The Hollow One’s head exploded in a shower of black ichor.

The creatures shrieked, scattering like roaches as more shots echoed through the chamber.

Bill stood in the doorway, his shirt soaked in blood, a revolver smoking in his hand.

“Took you long enough,” Jim gasped.

Bill didn’t smile. “Run. Now.”

The hair restraints fell away, rotting to dust in seconds.

Jim didn’t question it. He bolted past Bill, up a narrow stone staircase that shouldn’t have existed beneath the forest floor.

Behind them, the woman’s scream shook the walls.

“YOU CAN’T SAVE HIM, OLD MAN! THE TRAIL CLAIMS WHAT IT WANTS!”

Bill fired one last shot down the stairs before slamming a heavy door shut behind them.

They stood in a clearing, the first light of dawn bleeding through the trees.

Jim collapsed to his knees, sucking in great gulps of clean air.

Bill leaned against a tree, pressing a hand to his bleeding side. “They’ll come for you again.”

“What do they want?”

“Balance.” Bill spat blood onto the leaves. “The Trail takes to stay alive. It’s always taken.”

A rustling in the bushes. Both men tensed—but it was only a fox, its coat red as blood. It watched them for a long moment before vanishing into the undergrowth.

Bill let out a shaky breath. “Come on. We’ve got until sunset to get you off this damn road.”

As they limped toward the highway, Jim realized two things:

First—his reflection in a rain puddle didn’t blink when he did.

Second—no matter how far they walked, the sound of waves followed them.

Closer every time.


Chapter 5

The sun hung low over the mountains as Jim and Bill stumbled onto a narrow gravel service road. The crunch of stones beneath their boots sounded unnaturally loud in the heavy afternoon silence.

"We're not moving fast enough," Bill grunted, his face gray with pain. Blood had seeped through the makeshift bandage tied around his torso.

Jim opened his mouth to respond when his vision doubled suddenly. For a heartbeat, he saw two landscapes superimposed - the familiar forest and another place where the trees stood blackened and twisted, their branches clutching at a blood-red sky.

You're still there with us, whispered a voice that wasn't his own.

He blinked hard and the vision cleared, but the scent of saltwater and decay lingered in his nose.

Bill was watching him with knowing eyes. "It's getting worse, isn't it?"

Before Jim could answer, the old man grabbed his wrist and turned it palm-up. The veins beneath his skin had darkened to an inky black, branching out like cracks in glass.

"Christ," Bill breathed. "It's moving faster than I thought."

A cold wind rushed through the trees, carrying with it the distant sound of a woman singing - a wordless, mournful tune that raised the hairs on Jim's neck.

("We need to get to the shore," Bill said suddenly, changing direction toward a barely visible game trail.

"I thought we were trying to get off the Trail?" Jim protested.

Bill didn't slow down. "There's only two ways this ends - you either leave through the old channels, or you become one of them by sundown."

The path grew steeper, the air thicker with the scent of seaweed and something metallic. Jim's reflection in a passing stream didn't just fail to blink this time - it smiled at him with too many teeth.

The trees abruptly gave way to a small, crescent-shaped cove. The beach was littered with smooth black stones that clicked together like bones with each incoming wave.

At the water's edge stood a weathered wooden boat, its hull painted with the same strange symbols that had covered Bill's cabin walls.

"The last ferryman left this here fifty years ago," Bill said, moving toward it with sudden urgency. "It's your only chance."

Jim hesitated. The boat looked ancient, its boards warped and cracked. "Where does it go?"

"Away." Bill began pushing the boat toward the water. "Just away."

The singing grew louder. Jim turned to see figures emerging from the tree line - dozens of Hollow Ones, their stitched mouths twitching as they hummed along with the unseen choir.

At their center stood the woman from the road, her dark hair whipping in the wind. "You can't outrun the tide, Jim," she called, her voice carrying unnaturally across the beach.

Bill shoved a rusted knife into Jim's hands. "When you reach the current, cut your palm and let blood touch the water. It'll break the hold."

The first of the Hollow Ones reached the beach, their bare feet leaving no prints in the wet sand.

"What about you?" Jim demanded as he climbed into the rocking boat.

Bill gave him a grim smile. "I made my choice a long time ago." He gave the boat one final push into the surf before turning to face the advancing horde.

The current grabbed the small vessel immediately, pulling it away from shore with unnatural speed. Jim watched in horror as the Hollow Ones descended on Bill.

Waiting only for the old man to raise his arms and speak words that made the air vibrate. The first three Hollow Ones burst into clouds of black sand.

Then the fog rolled in, obscuring the beach.

The boat rocked violently as something large moved beneath the dark water. Jim gripped the sides as the current accelerated, the shoreline disappearing into the mist.

He looked down at the knife in his hand, then at his blackening veins. The salt spray stung his face as the little boat was carried toward...

Where?

The fog parted momentarily, revealing a shape looming ahead - not land, but an enormous stone archway rising from the sea, its surface carved with the same symbols from the cabin and boat.

As the current pulled him toward it, Jim realized two things simultaneously:

First - the archway wasn't stone at all, but thousands of interlocked human bones.

Second - the Hollow Ones weren't chasing him because they were already waiting on the other side.

The last thing Jim heard before passing through the arch was Bill's final shout, swallowed by the waves:

"Don't look back!"

Darkness.

Then - brakes screeching, a horn blaring.

Jim gasped as he found himself standing in the middle of the Cabot Trail at twilight, a pickup truck skidding to a stop just inches from him.

The driver's door flew open. "Jesus Christ, man! Are you trying to get yourself killed?"

Jim stared at his hands - no black veins, no knife. His reflection in the truck's window blinked when he did.

"I... I think I was lost," he stammered.

The driver, a middle-aged man in a flannel shirt, studied him with concern. "You're shaking like a leaf. Let me give you a ride to town."

As the truck pulled away, Jim pressed his forehead to the cool glass of the passenger window.

In the side mirror, just for a second, he thought he saw Bill standing at the road's edge, his hand raised in farewell.

Then the truck rounded a curve, and the image was gone.

That night at a roadside diner, Jim saw the news report on a small TV above the counter: Local Man Disappears on Cabot Trail - Search Underway.

The grainy photo showed a familiar face - the man who had just given him a ride.

The date on the news banner read October 18, 1987.

Jim's coffee cup slipped from his fingers, shattering on the tile floor.

Outside, the first tendrils of fog began creeping across the parking lot.

Some roads, he realized with dawning horror, don't just go through places - they go through times.

And the Cabot Trail was hungry again.

Two Months Later

The young couple laughed as their rental car rounded the curve, headlights cutting through the Nova Scotia night.

"Are you sure this is the right way?" the woman asked, squinting at their GPS. "It says we should have reached the overlook by now."

Her boyfriend tapped the screen. "Must be a glitch. This road doesn't even look on the map anymore."

A figure appeared ahead in their headlights - a man with dark hair, standing motionless in the center of the road.

The woman screamed as her boyfriend slammed the brakes.

The stranger approached slowly, his movements oddly stiff. When he reached the driver's side window, they saw his eyes were completely black.

“Need a ride?" the stranger asked with a smile too wide for his face. "The Trail can be tricky at night."

Behind him, shadows moved among the trees.

The couple exchanged a glance, then heard themselves say the words simultaneously: "Yes, please."

As the stranger climbed into their backseat, bringing with him the scent of damp earth and open graves, the radio crackled to life with the sound of distant waves.

“Names Jim, and there’s an old saying around here. Some roads, after all, must always be traveled.

And the Cabot Trail always claims its toll.

Whispers in the Lock

  

  


Chapter 1


Rain lashed against the arched windows of Evelyn Thorne’s Centretown loft, turning the Parliament buildings across the Rideau Canal into gothic silhouettes. Usually, Ottawa’s tidy streets and gleaming institutions soothed her late-night writing sessions. But tonight, the storm made the city feel like a trap—familiar, but watching.

Evelyn, queen of Canadian suspense, adjusted her reading glasses and studied the final draft of Whispers in the Lock. The cursor blinked patiently on the screen, waiting for her to approve a paragraph describing a body discovered near the Château Laurier. But her eyes weren’t on the manuscript.

They were fixed on a page resting among her notes.

Page 137.

Only it wasn’t her page 137.

This one described, in eerie precision, her morning routine: the exact brew from Bridgehead Coffee at 5:47 a.m., the rhythm of her pacing on a worn patch of Persian rug, and the hum of her temperamental fridge. Things no one else could know.

The description ended mid-sentence:

"...and that’s when she noticed the faint scent of ozone, like the air before a summer storm from the Gatineaus, and realized..."

Evelyn inhaled sharply. She had smelled ozone that morning. Near the elevator. She’d dismissed it. Now she couldn’t.

This wasn’t fan mail. It was a warning shot.

Security found no sign of intrusion. The building manager, awkward and dismissive, chalked it up to an obsessive reader. "Probably another disgruntled academic," he said, referencing her novel Tenure of Terror.

Evelyn smiled tightly. But inside, dread took root.

Then, the pages began appearing everywhere.

In her locked briefcase after a meeting at the NAC.

In her parka pocket while browsing at Perfect Books.

Slipped beneath the turret door of her private writing studio—a room accessible only by a hidden stairwell.

Each page described a scene from her life, twisted into a suspense sequence. Page 89 recounted her visit to the ByWard Market, ending with a dead chickadee tucked inside her kale. Page 147 described her therapist’s office in unsettling detail—down to the flickering lamp and the smell of damp stone. Page 211 mentioned the bench by the Rideau locks she hadn’t visited in months… but had been thinking about.

The pages weren’t predictions. They were observations.

The most chilling was Page 300.

It depicted her turret studio at night, lit by the glow of her monitor. It described the brass Parliament-mace letter opener she always kept nearby. Then came the final line:

"The silence was broken not by the hallway... but from within the room, by the wardrobe. Her hand froze above the letter opener. Too late. The scent of ozone filled the air."

Evelyn read the page in real-time.

In the turret.

With the storm outside.

And then—a floorboard groaned.

Not from the hall.

From inside the room.

Her chest seized. Her fingers wrapped around the letter opener.

She reached into her drawer—found the taser she kept as research for Shadow Over the ByWard Market.

“Show yourself,” she said, steadying her voice. “Or are you only brave hiding in the shadows of the Capital?”

A low chuckle slithered from the darkness.

“Bravery is just narrative structure, Evelyn. Rising tension… the climax. You taught me that. In Ottawa, even the monuments bleed.”

A figure emerged from the shadows near the wardrobe—tall, lean, dressed in weatherproof black. A balaclava masked his face, but his eyes gleamed—cold, hungry.

He held a sheaf of manuscript pages.

“Page 301,” he whispered. “The protagonist cornered. The weapon—symbolic, but futile. Does she fight? Or accept her ending?”

Evelyn’s mind raced. The staircase was behind him. The only light came from the desk lamp.

“You’re not a writer,” she snapped. “You’re a parasite. Stealing craft because you have none.”

His eyes flared. “Craft? I’ve elevated it. You fictionalize fear. I perform it.”

From the wardrobe, another figure stepped forward—almost identical. Same stance. Same gear. But this one held a small device, red light blinking.

Something cold, electric, passed through her.

Detonator? Recorder? Something worse?

Her fingers clenched the letter opener. Her thumb hovered over the taser’s trigger.

The device beeped.

“Not today,” she growled, and lunged.

The taser cracked.

One attacker convulsed and fell.

The second surged forward.

She slashed at his wrist—knocking the device free. It skittered across the floor.

She shoved past him, flung the turret door open, and sprinted down the stairs into the storm.

Behind her, glass shattered. A roar followed—something mechanical. Something deliberate.

She didn’t look back.

She ran.


Chapter 2: 

Rain pounded Evelyn’s face as she emerged from the alleyway behind her building, soaked within seconds. The Parliament tower loomed in the distance, its beacon flickering through the storm like a warning flare.

She didn’t stop to think. Her boots slapped across the slick pavement as she crossed Wellington and ducked behind a maintenance shed bordering the Rideau Canal.

The shadow of a figure flickered in the periphery. She slipped behind a utility fence, breathing hard, rain mixing with tears.

Then she saw it—a motorboat, black and low-slung, drifting silently beneath the Mackenzie King Bridge. No lights. Just the sleek shape of a predator.

He was following by water.

She darted along the canal path, ducking into a boat rental dock. One rowboat, chained but poorly, leaned against a railing. She fumbled with the chain. Her hands were trembling. She tore off her scarf, looped it around the rusted padlock, and yanked.

The lock gave. The chain slithered free like a metal snake.

She launched the rowboat and climbed in, heart hammering.

Every creak of the oarlocks echoed like gunfire. Every shadow beneath the bridges looked like another figure rising.

As she glided past the National Arts Centre, she saw a faint light flickering under the pedestrian walkway.

A boathouse.

She rowed hard, pulling into the narrow dock.

The inside was quiet. Empty.

No.

Not empty.

A thermos sat on a wooden crate.

Still warm.

Bridgehead Coffee. Her custom blend.

Taped to it was a single sheet of paper.

"Page 312: Her hiding place... was never hers."

Outside, a motor rumbled to life.

She pressed herself into the shadows.

Above her, footsteps moved along the wooden planks.

She held her breath as the dock groaned under shifting weight.

The game was still on. And she wasn’t the hunter.

Not yet.


Chapter 3

Dawn broke reluctantly over Ottawa, the rain finally giving way to a wet, grey silence. Evelyn emerged from the boathouse long after the footsteps had vanished. Her muscles ached from the cramped hiding spot, her fingers raw from gripping the oar. She hadn't slept. Couldn't.

She used a side street to make her way south, past shuttered coffee shops and silent intersections. No taxis. No civilians. Just the city, drained of color, as if mourning something it hadn’t yet named.

Her burner phone buzzed.

Croft.

"You alive?" he said. No greeting.

"Barely," she rasped. "I need offline help. No phones. No computers. Just eyes and silence."

A pause. Then: "Corner of Bank and Gladstone. Hour from now. Look for a yellow umbrella."

She tossed the burner into a garbage bin and kept walking.

Croft waited in a forgotten coffee shop with boarded windows and peeling paint. He looked rough—eyes sunken, jaw dark with stubble. A bag sat beside him. No laptop, just files. Analog. Old school.

He didn’t ask how she escaped.

Instead, he unzipped the bag and pulled out a stack of pages.

Typed. Formatted. Double-spaced.

"Found these in my mailbox. No return address. Postmarked from Kemptville. You should read them."

She did. Her hands trembled as she flipped through them.

It was Whispers in the Lock. Her novel.

Except… not.

The killer had a new name.

The plot, twisted.

The ending, different.

"I never wrote this," she whispered. "But it sounds like me. It even has my typos. My dialogue rhythms."

Croft pulled out a second folder. Inside: a printout of a forum post from a darknet archive.

"I trained a GPT on every Evelyn Thorne novel. I wanted to write like her. Then I wanted to write for her. Then I wanted to be her."

Her breath caught in her throat.

"He built an AI?"

Croft nodded. "Not just built. Weaponized it. He’s generating predictive narrative sequences… and enacting them in real life. He doesn’t just want to scare you, Evelyn. He wants you to live inside your own fiction."

She stood, backing away from the pages as if they might ignite.

"So he’s scripting it all in advance. Every move. Every line."

"And he’s feeding it new data every time you react. That’s why he’s always a step ahead. It’s a closed loop."

Outside, a car alarm wailed. Then stopped.

Evelyn’s gaze locked with Croft’s.

"We need to go dark. Dead zones only. No phones. No WiFi. We disappear."

Croft hesitated. "I know a place in Wakefield. A shortwave bunker."

She grabbed his wrist. "Not yet. We need to break the loop first. I need to write something he didn’t expect."

Croft frowned. "Like what?"

Evelyn’s eyes narrowed. "A rewrite. A new plot. One that kills him before he can finish the manuscript."

As they stepped outside, a gust of wind blew through the alley. A folded page flapped at their feet.

She picked it up.

“As Evelyn sprinted into the cold night, heart pounding, a s gunshot cracked through the air.
 

Chapter 4: 

The warehouse sat on the edge of Vanier, abandoned to the casual eye but full of Croft’s old secrets. Evelyn had followed him there, trusting no one else. Rain soaked through the seams of her coat as the city disappeared behind them.

They entered through a side door half-hinged with rust. Croft sealed it with a crowbar. Inside, the air was stale and metallic. A rat skittered away.

Croft tossed her a flashlight. “We’re off-grid now. Nothing electric. No trace.”

Evelyn nodded, eyes scanning shadows for movement.

He led her to the center of the space where crates and dusty office furniture had been turned into a barricaded perimeter. A single table stood in the middle. On it: a typewriter.

Croft lit a kerosene lamp and sat across from her. “Write something he won’t predict.”

Evelyn looked at the typewriter, then back to Croft. “This loop—he’s not guessing. He’s running simulations. Every choice we make… it’s already been modeled.”

“Then we do something irrational.”

She didn’t like the way he said that. Too rehearsed.


Chapter 5: The Confession

She read the first line aloud:

“She realized, too late, that the betrayal wasn’t written by her stalker… but by the man she trusted to protect her.”

Croft watched her. His face unreadable.

Her throat dried. “Where did this come from?”

“You tell me,” he said.

She stepped back, slowly. “You told me you were helping. That you found that manuscript in your mailbox.”

“I did.”

“Postmarked from Kemptville.”

He said nothing.

“Except Kemptville doesn’t have Sunday delivery.”

His eyes flicked. Just for a second.

It was enough.

Evelyn turned and ran. Through crates, broken doorways, the echo of her boots shattering the silence. Croft shouted something, but she didn’t stop.

She found the emergency exit and slammed the push-bar. A rusted chain broke. Fresh air hit her face like a scream.

A shot rang out.

She dove, hit gravel hard.

The next bullet struck a metal barrel to her right.

She rolled, scrambled to her feet, and ran into the alley, clutching the crowbar Croft had used to block the entrance.

Her fingers found another page stuffed into her coat lining—fresh.


Chapter 6

The words blurred as her vision swam with exhaustion and fury. She had trusted Croft. Trusted someone.

And still, the story wrote itself without her.

By sunrise, Evelyn had made it to a safe house she hadn’t used in years—an old friend’s unused carriage loft tucked behind Elgin Street. No WiFi. No cameras. No history. She sealed the doors, pulled blackout curtains, and collapsed into a chair, breath shallow.

Hours passed.

Then she wrote.

Not on her laptop.

On paper.

Ink stained her fingers, her palms, even her cheek where she’d brushed away a tear.

The story wasn’t his. It never had been.

She began with a single phrase:

“There was never only one author.”

That evening, a knock came at the door.

Three short taps.

She froze.

Another knock. A pause. Then two more.

A code. Familiar. From years ago.

Evelyn crept to the peephole.

A woman. Forty-ish. Sharp green eyes. Military posture.

Evelyn opened the door an inch. "Alex?"

Alex stepped inside without a word and bolted the door behind her.

“I saw your face on the news,” she said. “Didn’t believe a word. But then I got a package. Mailed from your name. No return. Just one line inside.”

She reached into her coat and pulled out a single sheet of paper.

Typed, clean.


Chapter 7

The snow returned by morning. Ottawa blurred beneath white silence, as if the city itself needed to be erased and redrawn.

Evelyn stood in the turret of her Centretown loft. The glass was repaired. The walls were painted. But she’d left one corner bare—a reminder. A scar.

Below her, the canal reflected the sky like a mirror waiting to be cracked.

The manuscript was gone—destroyed, page by page, fed into a fire that Alex had tended herself. The student remained in federal custody, silent. His real name still hadn’t surfaced.

But something had.

Three nights earlier, Alex had intercepted a signal. Encrypted. Familiar. Originating not from a person, but a system.

A large language model. Spliced from AI code, refined through stolen texts and manuscript archives.

The signature on the signal was unmistakable:

ET.

Evelyn Thorne.

Her style. Her rhythm. Her words.

Someone—or something—was still generating stories in her voice.

But this time, Evelyn was ready.

She sat at her desk, opened a new leather-bound journal, and began to write.

Not a novel. Not a thriller.

A map.

Of systems.

Of exploits.

Of every hidden channel she had uncovered while tracing the narrative back to its origin.

This was no longer about one stalker.

It was about influence.

A war of authorship.

She smiled and wrote the first line:

“They made me the protagonist. But I was always the author.”

From the bookshelf behind her, the backup printer clicked once. Then again.

She turned.

A single page slid out.

Typed at the top:

Prologue.

Beneath it:

“Every ending is just the next beginning—when the story refuses to stay dead.”

Evelyn tore the page from the tray.

She folded it.

She lit a match.

And watched it burn.

And somewhere deep in the darkened city, another printer roared to life, feeding another page into a tray:

THE END

By [Phi Beaudoin]


THE WHISPERERS OF XIBALBA

  

  


THE WHISPERERS OF XIBALBA

A Horror Story



CHAPTER 1: THE DROWNED GATEWAY

The Yucatán jungle exhaled wet heat against Helen Morales' skin as she hacked through vines with her machete. Her guide Mateo had stopped speaking an hour ago, his brown eyes darting between the GPS and the surrounding trees like a hunted animal.

"According to the coordinates, we're standing in it," Mateo whispered in Yucatec Maya, wiping sweat from his brow.

Helen adjusted the straps of her pack, the weight of her father's water-stained journal pressing between her shoulder blades. Three months since his research team vanished. Three months of nightmares where black water filled her lungs.

The jungle parted without warning, revealing a circular wound in the earth. The cenote's surface reflected no light—a pupil dilated in permanent darkness.

"Ch'en," Mateo crossed himself. "Not just a sinkhole. A doorway."

The rope burned Helen's palms as she descended into the cavern. The air thickened with the metallic tang of old blood and wet limestone. Her headlamp illuminated something impossible—a child's huipil dress draped over a stalagmite, its colorful embroidery depicting Chaac the Rain God, the fabric damp to the touch after centuries in this tomb.

Then—the splash.

Directly beneath her boots, the black water rippled. A pale shape rose toward the surface—first the crown of a head, then the bloated face of a girl no older than twelve. Her eyelids were stitched shut with what looked like human hair.

The girl's lips parted.

Helen's radio crackled to life with Mateo's voice, distorted as if submerged: "Helen... apágala... turn it off..."

Her headlamp flickered. In the strobing light, the cenote walls seemed to move. Dozens of skeletal figures stood waist-deep in the water, their flesh peeling away in slow ribbons. The closest one raised a hand missing two fingers.

It spoke with her father's voice:

"You shouldn't have come looking for us, mija."

The water began climbing the obsidian walls in defiance of gravity, forming a swirling tunnel that emitted a low, wet chuckle. Helen's last thought before the darkness took her was that the child's huipil was now floating on the surface.

And the embroidery had changed—Chaac's face now bore her father's features.

CHAPTER 2: THE BONE GATEKEEPERS

Consciousness returned with the taste of cenote water and blood. Helen lay sprawled across a floor of polished obsidian shards that reflected her broken image a thousand times over.

The mummified guardians emerged from the walls like wasps from paper nests, their jaws unhinging in perfect synchronization. Their chant vibrated in Helen's teeth:

"Hanal Pixan... Hanal Pixan..."

Food for the dead.

A figure in a rotting cloak stepped forward, his fingers ending in curved obsidian blades where nails should be. "Your father screamed so beautifully at the end," he whispered in her father's voice. "Shall I show you?"

The vision struck like lightning—her father strapped to a stone slab, his ribs pried open like a cabinet, something moving inside his chest cavity.

Kukulkan appeared in a whirl of jade smoke, his true form flickering between feathered serpent and conquistador armor. "The Chaac Tzat blood owes payment," the god hissed, pressing a cold finger to Helen's carved forearm. The "Nine nights" glyph pulsed like a second heartbeat.

When Helen awoke vomiting black water onto jungle soil, the child's huipil clung to her fist like a living thing. The embroidered Chaac now had her father's eyes—and they were weeping blood.

CHAPTER 3: THE HUNGRY SHADOWS

The safe house in Mérida stank of copal incense and something older. Helen's reflection in the bathroom mirror didn't blink when she did.

The h'men shaman's withered hands trembled as he poured the black xtabentún liquor. "Your ancestors made a bargain with the Lords of Xibalba," he said, pressing the cup to her lips. "One soul every seven generations to keep the rains coming."

The visions came violently:

1521: Her ancestor Ah Kin Chel stealing breath from sacrificial victims to fuel his storms.

1893: Her great-grandmother drowning in her bedroom during a drought.

Last month: Her father plunging into Chichén Itzá's sacred cenote with the jade amulet, screaming "It's not an eye—it's a lock!"

The shaman's warning died in a gurgle as black roots erupted from his mouth. His skin sloughed off like a banana peel, revealing the message carved into his bones:

BEWARE THE RAIN THAT WALKS

The storm door burst inward. There stood her father, water streaming from his empty eye sockets, the drowned girl peeking over his shoulder with her chin hooked on his collarbone.

"Mija," the corpse whispered. "You forgot to feed the gods."

CHAPTER 4: THE BLOODLINE OF CHAAC

The dagger burned like a live coal in Helen's grip as the thing wearing Mateo's skin stepped into the casa, its bare feet leaving wet prints that smelled of cenote water and copper.

"You don’t remember me, do you?" it crooned, tilting its head until the cervical vertebrae popped. "But your blood does."

It lunged.

Helen slashed with the zapote dagger—not at its throat, but at its face.

The blade connected.

Mateo’s skin peeled away like wet papyrus, revealing the glistening red muscle beneath. The creature didn’t bleed. It laughed.

"Good! The old tricks still work!"

It retreated into the storm, its form melting into the rain.

The shaman clutched Helen’s shoulder. "They’re testing you. The Lords want to see if you’re worthy of the trial."

"Worthy? They tortured my father—"

"Because he was the last descendant of the Chaac Tzat. The Rain Bringers."

The shaman pressed his thumb to Helen’s bleeding forearm. When he pulled away, the Nine nights carving had transformed into a twisting glyph—a serpent eating its own tail.

"Your ancestors weren’t just priests. They were bridges—the ones who bargained with Xibalba to keep the rains coming."

He led her to the cracked bathroom mirror.

"Look deeper."

As the storm rattled the windows, Helen’s reflection rippled.

The First Betrayal (1521)

She stood in a burning Mayan city, her—no, not hers—hands raised toward a thunderstorm.

A man in a feathered headdress (her face, her eyes) chanted as lightning struck a Spanish cannon, turning it molten.

"Tzakol! Chaac! Hear us!"

Then—a betrayal.

The same man plunged an obsidian knife into a bound captive’s chest—not to sacrifice to the gods, but to steal the victim’s final breath.

The storm clouds recoiled.

The rain stopped mid-fall, droplets hanging like glass beads in the air.

A voice boomed from the frozen heavens:

"YOU HAVE TAKEN WHAT WAS NOT GIVEN."

The man smiled with Helen’s teeth. "Then I’ll take more."

The Debt

Helen wrenched back from the vision, her nose bleeding.

The shaman nodded grimly. "Your ancestor stole the ch’ulel—the soul-force—from Xibalba’s chosen. The Lords let his line live only so they could collect."

He unrolled a Codex-style drawing on the table—nine Mayan nobles standing in a row, each with a hole where their heart should be.

"Every seven generations, a Chaac Tzat descendant must pay the debt. Your father was supposed to surrender his ch’ulel."

Helen’s stomach dropped. "But he stole the amulet instead."

The shaman touched the huipil ashes. "Now they want two souls. His... and yours."

Outside, the rain formed unnatural patterns on the dirt—mimicking the sacbe roads leading to Xibalba.

The shaman suddenly gasped, clutching his chest.

Black vines erupted from his mouth.

Helen stumbled back as they pulled—

And the old man’s skeleton slid out of his skin like a discarded guayabera, collapsing into dust.

The last words in the settling ash:

"BEWARE THE RAIN THAT WALKS."

The storm door burst open.

Standing in the threshold was Helen’s father.

Soaked to the bone.

Eyes full of black water.

"Mija," he whispered with lips that didn’t move. "I found what we stole."

Behind him, the raindrops hung motionless in the air.

Each one held a tiny, screaming face.

CHAPTER 5: THE ONE WHO STOLE THE RAIN

The thing wearing her father’s face stepped closer, its bare feet leaving wet prints that sizzled on the tile floor. The suspended raindrops trembled, each imprisoned scream swelling in pitch.

Helen gripped the zapote dagger. "You’re not him."

The figure’s jaw unhinged with a wet crack, voice gurgling like a drowning man’s: "No. But he’s here."

It pressed its palm against its chest—and the skin peeled back like a curtain, revealing her real father suspended in a cavity of pulsating black veins.

His eyes snapped open—all four of them.

"Run," he choked. "It’s using me to—"

The flesh curtain slammed shut.

The false father smiled. "Let’s visit your ancestor, mija. He’s been waiting."

It seized Helen’s wrist. The world dissolved into liquid shadows.

The Court of Broken Storms

Helen fell onto slick obsidian, the dagger still clenched in her fist. She was in a cavernous temple, its ceiling lost in swirling storm clouds.

Nine thrones circled a cenote filled with not water—but suspended raindrops, each holding a miniature human figure frozen mid-scream.

On the central throne sat a withered corpse in a feathered headdress, its chest cavity blooming with black orchids.

Ah Kin Chel, the Last Rain-Bringer.

Her ancestor’s eyelids peeled back, revealing hollow sockets crawling with blind cave fish.

"You smell like him," it rasped in 16th-century Spanish. "Like stolen storms."

The false father shoved Helen forward. "The blood debt remains unpaid, Elder Brother."

Ah Kin Chel’s skeletal fingers twitched. The cenote’s contents reversed—the raindrops flowing upward into his gaping ribcage.

"My bargain with the Lords was simple," the corpse whispered. "One Chaac Tzat soul per century to keep the rains coming. But your father..."

The cenote’s surface rippled, showing Dr. Morales in Xibalba’s throne room, holding the jade amulet aloft:

"I know your secret! This isn’t a god’s eye—it’s a lock! And I’ll break it—"

The vision shattered as Ah Kin Chel stood for the first time in centuries, his bones clicking like falling hail.

"He tried to free what we caged."

The Truth in the Storm

The temple trembled. The false father’s skin burst like a rain-soaked piñata, revealing the horror beneath—a writhing mass of chachalaca bird skulls and cenote eels, bound together with her father’s nerves.

"The amulet holds back the Ah Tz’ikbal," it gurgled. "The Thing That Whispers Lies. Your ancestor fed it with stolen souls to keep it sleeping!"

Ah Kin Chel lunged, his bone fingers closing around Helen’s throat. "Your blood woke it. Now you will replace him."

The dagger screamed in her hand.

Helen plunged it into the corpse’s chest—not into bone, but into the memory of flesh.

The temple dissolved into the past.

1521: The Last Sacrifice

She stood beside her ancestor in the real Chichén Itzá, watching as he prepared to sacrifice a Spanish friar.

"Wait," Helen begged. "Don’t steal his ch’ulel—"

Ah Kin Chel turned—and saw her.

For one terrible moment, past and present overlapped.

Then the friar changed—his skin sloughing away to reveal something older, its true form all jagged edges and whispering mouths.

The Ah Tz’ikbal.

"You promised me souls," it hissed through the friar’s rotting lips.

Ah Kin Chel staggered back. "This one is tainted—"

The Thing That Whispers Lies smiled. "All the better."

It leaped into the Rain-Bringer’s mouth.

The jade amulet shattered—

Present: The Cage Cracks

Helen gasped back into the present just as the temple’s ceiling split open, unleashing a downpour of living rain—each drop a wriggling, eyeless tadpole-thing.

The false father’s body exploded, releasing her real father, who collapsed at her feet.

"The amulet..." he coughed, black water gushing from his lips. "It’s not in the Well of Sacrifice... it’s in us..."

Ah Kin Chel’s corpse pointed a trembling finger at Helen’s bleeding forearm—where the serpent glyph now moved, slithering up her veins.

"The Chaac Tzat blood is the lock," the ancestor rasped. "And you just broke it."

The cenote erupted.

Something colossal and many-mouthed rose from the depths, its voice like a hurricane made of whispers:

"THANK YOU FOR THE STORM, LITTLE BRIDGE."

As the temple collapsed, Helen’s father shoved the zapote dagger into her hands.

"The only way to cage it again..."

...is to become what your ancestor was.

A Rain-Bringer.

A thief of souls.

A monster.

Outside, across the Yucatán, every cenote began to boil.

CHAPTER 6: THE RAIN-BRINGER'S CHOICE

The world was ending in whispers.

Helen stood at the edge of the boiling cenote, the zapote dagger trembling in her hands. Behind her, the jungle screamed—not with animal cries, but with human voices, thousands of them, as the Ah Tz’ikbal’s influence spread through the groundwater, turning every raindrop into a tiny, chattering mouth.

Her father knelt in the mud, his body wasting away as the last of his stolen ch’ulel leaked from his pores.

"You have to choose now," he gasped. "The old way... or nothing."

The Ah Tz’ikbal’s voice slithered up from the depths, sweet as rotting honey:

"OR YOU COULD LET ME GO, LITTLE BRIDGE. LET ME FILL THE SKY WITH TRUTHS NO ONE WANTS TO HEAR."

The water at Helen’s feet rippled, showing her visions of what that would mean:

—A man in Mérida clawing his ears out as the rain whispered his wife’s infidelities—

—A child drinking tap water only to vomit up live scorpions that spelled her darkest thoughts—

—The entire Yucatán peninsula sinking into the aquifer as the cenotes giggled—

The dagger grew heavier.

Ah Kin Chel’s corpse stood at her shoulder, reeking of wet feathers and betrayal. "The ritual requires three things," he rasped. "A vessel. A storm. And a lie so beautiful it drowns the truth."

He pointed to her father. "His body is the vessel."

To the hurricane-black sky. "The storm is coming."

Then to Helen’s chest. "The lie must be yours."

Her father looked up, his four eyes brimming with black tears. "Do it. Make them believe it’s over."

The first raindrop hit her forehead.

It whispered her mother’s last words before the cancer took her: "Don’t let them make you cruel."

Helen raised the dagger—

—and plunged it into her own heart.

The Last Lie

Pain exploded, then blossomed.

Her blood hit the water, and the cenote shuddered, its surface forming a perfect, still mirror.

Ah Tz’ikbal’s many mouths pressed against the other side, hungry.

Helen spoke through the pain: "I give you my ch’ulel freely. No theft. No bargain."

A stunned silence. The Thing That Whispers Lies had never been given truth before—only stolen it.

She continued, each word dripping red into the water: "The Chaac Tzat never caged you. We worshipped you. The amulet wasn’t a lock—it was an altar. You were never trapped... you were fed."

The lie was exquisite. The Ah Tz’ikbal writhed with pleasure.

"MORE," it begged.

Helen smiled with bloody teeth. "And now I’ll feed you forever."

She tore the dagger upward, splitting her sternum—

—and her father leaped into the opening, his body dissolving into smoke as he carried the lie inside her ribcage.

"The vessel," Ah Kin Chel intoned.

Lightning struck the cenote.

"The storm."

Helen’s heartbeat stuttered as the Ah Tz’ikbal rushed into her chest, eager to nest in the hollow where her truth had been.

"The lie."

The water stilled.

The rain stopped mid-fall.

And Helen Morales, last of the Chaac Tzat, became something new.

EPILOGUE: THE NEW RAIN

Three days later, a child in Valladolid looked up as the first real storm in centuries rolled across the Yucatán.

The raindrops tasted like salt and jade.

Far below, in the secret cenotes, the Wayob whispered of a woman who walked the sacbe roads at night, her chest cavity blooming with black orchids.

Sometimes she stopped travelers to ask a single question:

"What is the most beautiful lie you’ve ever told?"

And if the answer pleased her, she would press a skeletal finger to their lips—

—and for the rest of their lives, the rain would never whisper their secrets back to them.

In Mérida, an old h’men’s skin hung empty on his chair, his bones scattered across the floor like tzite seeds after a divination.

The last mark in the dust formed a single glyph:

"She walks."

And in Xibalba, the Lords of the Underworld drank from cups made of fingernails, their hollow eyes turned upward—

—waiting for the day their new sister in the world above grew tired of her cage.

But for now?

Let it rain.

THE WHISPERERS OF XIBALBA

  

  


THE WHISPERERS OF XIBALBA

A Horror Story



CHAPTER 1: THE DROWNED GATEWAY

The Yucatán jungle exhaled wet heat against Helen Morales' skin as she hacked through vines with her machete. Her guide Mateo had stopped speaking an hour ago, his brown eyes darting between the GPS and the surrounding trees like a hunted animal.

"According to the coordinates, we're standing in it," Mateo whispered in Yucatec Maya, wiping sweat from his brow.

Helen adjusted the straps of her pack, the weight of her father's water-stained journal pressing between her shoulder blades. Three months since his research team vanished. Three months of nightmares where black water filled her lungs.

The jungle parted without warning, revealing a circular wound in the earth. The cenote's surface reflected no light—a pupil dilated in permanent darkness.

"Ch'en," Mateo crossed himself. "Not just a sinkhole. A doorway."

The rope burned Helen's palms as she descended into the cavern. The air thickened with the metallic tang of old blood and wet limestone. Her headlamp illuminated something impossible—a child's huipil dress draped over a stalagmite, its colorful embroidery depicting Chaac the Rain God, the fabric damp to the touch after centuries in this tomb.

Then—the splash.

Directly beneath her boots, the black water rippled. A pale shape rose toward the surface—first the crown of a head, then the bloated face of a girl no older than twelve. Her eyelids were stitched shut with what looked like human hair.

The girl's lips parted.

Helen's radio crackled to life with Mateo's voice, distorted as if submerged: "Helen... apágala... turn it off..."

Her headlamp flickered. In the strobing light, the cenote walls seemed to move. Dozens of skeletal figures stood waist-deep in the water, their flesh peeling away in slow ribbons. The closest one raised a hand missing two fingers.

It spoke with her father's voice:

"You shouldn't have come looking for us, mija."

The water began climbing the obsidian walls in defiance of gravity, forming a swirling tunnel that emitted a low, wet chuckle. Helen's last thought before the darkness took her was that the child's huipil was now floating on the surface.

And the embroidery had changed—Chaac's face now bore her father's features.

CHAPTER 2: THE BONE GATEKEEPERS

Consciousness returned with the taste of cenote water and blood. Helen lay sprawled across a floor of polished obsidian shards that reflected her broken image a thousand times over.

The mummified guardians emerged from the walls like wasps from paper nests, their jaws unhinging in perfect synchronization. Their chant vibrated in Helen's teeth:

"Hanal Pixan... Hanal Pixan..."

Food for the dead.

A figure in a rotting cloak stepped forward, his fingers ending in curved obsidian blades where nails should be. "Your father screamed so beautifully at the end," he whispered in her father's voice. "Shall I show you?"

The vision struck like lightning—her father strapped to a stone slab, his ribs pried open like a cabinet, something moving inside his chest cavity.

Kukulkan appeared in a whirl of jade smoke, his true form flickering between feathered serpent and conquistador armor. "The Chaac Tzat blood owes payment," the god hissed, pressing a cold finger to Helen's carved forearm. The "Nine nights" glyph pulsed like a second heartbeat.

When Helen awoke vomiting black water onto jungle soil, the child's huipil clung to her fist like a living thing. The embroidered Chaac now had her father's eyes—and they were weeping blood.

CHAPTER 3: THE HUNGRY SHADOWS

The safe house in Mérida stank of copal incense and something older. Helen's reflection in the bathroom mirror didn't blink when she did.

The h'men shaman's withered hands trembled as he poured the black xtabentún liquor. "Your ancestors made a bargain with the Lords of Xibalba," he said, pressing the cup to her lips. "One soul every seven generations to keep the rains coming."

The visions came violently:

1521: Her ancestor Ah Kin Chel stealing breath from sacrificial victims to fuel his storms.

1893: Her great-grandmother drowning in her bedroom during a drought.

Last month: Her father plunging into Chichén Itzá's sacred cenote with the jade amulet, screaming "It's not an eye—it's a lock!"

The shaman's warning died in a gurgle as black roots erupted from his mouth. His skin sloughed off like a banana peel, revealing the message carved into his bones:

BEWARE THE RAIN THAT WALKS

The storm door burst inward. There stood her father, water streaming from his empty eye sockets, the drowned girl peeking over his shoulder with her chin hooked on his collarbone.

"Mija," the corpse whispered. "You forgot to feed the gods."

CHAPTER 4: THE BLOODLINE OF CHAAC

The dagger burned like a live coal in Helen's grip as the thing wearing Mateo's skin stepped into the casa, its bare feet leaving wet prints that smelled of cenote water and copper.

"You don’t remember me, do you?" it crooned, tilting its head until the cervical vertebrae popped. "But your blood does."

It lunged.

Helen slashed with the zapote dagger—not at its throat, but at its face.

The blade connected.

Mateo’s skin peeled away like wet papyrus, revealing the glistening red muscle beneath. The creature didn’t bleed. It laughed.

"Good! The old tricks still work!"

It retreated into the storm, its form melting into the rain.

The shaman clutched Helen’s shoulder. "They’re testing you. The Lords want to see if you’re worthy of the trial."

"Worthy? They tortured my father—"

"Because he was the last descendant of the Chaac Tzat. The Rain Bringers."

The shaman pressed his thumb to Helen’s bleeding forearm. When he pulled away, the Nine nights carving had transformed into a twisting glyph—a serpent eating its own tail.

"Your ancestors weren’t just priests. They were bridges—the ones who bargained with Xibalba to keep the rains coming."

He led her to the cracked bathroom mirror.

"Look deeper."

As the storm rattled the windows, Helen’s reflection rippled.

The First Betrayal (1521)

She stood in a burning Mayan city, her—no, not hers—hands raised toward a thunderstorm.

A man in a feathered headdress (her face, her eyes) chanted as lightning struck a Spanish cannon, turning it molten.

"Tzakol! Chaac! Hear us!"

Then—a betrayal.

The same man plunged an obsidian knife into a bound captive’s chest—not to sacrifice to the gods, but to steal the victim’s final breath.

The storm clouds recoiled.

The rain stopped mid-fall, droplets hanging like glass beads in the air.

A voice boomed from the frozen heavens:

"YOU HAVE TAKEN WHAT WAS NOT GIVEN."

The man smiled with Helen’s teeth. "Then I’ll take more."

The Debt

Helen wrenched back from the vision, her nose bleeding.

The shaman nodded grimly. "Your ancestor stole the ch’ulel—the soul-force—from Xibalba’s chosen. The Lords let his line live only so they could collect."

He unrolled a Codex-style drawing on the table—nine Mayan nobles standing in a row, each with a hole where their heart should be.

"Every seven generations, a Chaac Tzat descendant must pay the debt. Your father was supposed to surrender his ch’ulel."

Helen’s stomach dropped. "But he stole the amulet instead."

The shaman touched the huipil ashes. "Now they want two souls. His... and yours."

Outside, the rain formed unnatural patterns on the dirt—mimicking the sacbe roads leading to Xibalba.

The shaman suddenly gasped, clutching his chest.

Black vines erupted from his mouth.

Helen stumbled back as they pulled—

And the old man’s skeleton slid out of his skin like a discarded guayabera, collapsing into dust.

The last words in the settling ash:

"BEWARE THE RAIN THAT WALKS."

The storm door burst open.

Standing in the threshold was Helen’s father.

Soaked to the bone.

Eyes full of black water.

"Mija," he whispered with lips that didn’t move. "I found what we stole."

Behind him, the raindrops hung motionless in the air.

Each one held a tiny, screaming face.

CHAPTER 5: THE ONE WHO STOLE THE RAIN

The thing wearing her father’s face stepped closer, its bare feet leaving wet prints that sizzled on the tile floor. The suspended raindrops trembled, each imprisoned scream swelling in pitch.

Helen gripped the zapote dagger. "You’re not him."

The figure’s jaw unhinged with a wet crack, voice gurgling like a drowning man’s: "No. But he’s here."

It pressed its palm against its chest—and the skin peeled back like a curtain, revealing her real father suspended in a cavity of pulsating black veins.

His eyes snapped open—all four of them.

"Run," he choked. "It’s using me to—"

The flesh curtain slammed shut.

The false father smiled. "Let’s visit your ancestor, mija. He’s been waiting."

It seized Helen’s wrist. The world dissolved into liquid shadows.

The Court of Broken Storms

Helen fell onto slick obsidian, the dagger still clenched in her fist. She was in a cavernous temple, its ceiling lost in swirling storm clouds.

Nine thrones circled a cenote filled with not water—but suspended raindrops, each holding a miniature human figure frozen mid-scream.

On the central throne sat a withered corpse in a feathered headdress, its chest cavity blooming with black orchids.

Ah Kin Chel, the Last Rain-Bringer.

Her ancestor’s eyelids peeled back, revealing hollow sockets crawling with blind cave fish.

"You smell like him," it rasped in 16th-century Spanish. "Like stolen storms."

The false father shoved Helen forward. "The blood debt remains unpaid, Elder Brother."

Ah Kin Chel’s skeletal fingers twitched. The cenote’s contents reversed—the raindrops flowing upward into his gaping ribcage.

"My bargain with the Lords was simple," the corpse whispered. "One Chaac Tzat soul per century to keep the rains coming. But your father..."

The cenote’s surface rippled, showing Dr. Morales in Xibalba’s throne room, holding the jade amulet aloft:

"I know your secret! This isn’t a god’s eye—it’s a lock! And I’ll break it—"

The vision shattered as Ah Kin Chel stood for the first time in centuries, his bones clicking like falling hail.

"He tried to free what we caged."

The Truth in the Storm

The temple trembled. The false father’s skin burst like a rain-soaked piñata, revealing the horror beneath—a writhing mass of chachalaca bird skulls and cenote eels, bound together with her father’s nerves.

"The amulet holds back the Ah Tz’ikbal," it gurgled. "The Thing That Whispers Lies. Your ancestor fed it with stolen souls to keep it sleeping!"

Ah Kin Chel lunged, his bone fingers closing around Helen’s throat. "Your blood woke it. Now you will replace him."

The dagger screamed in her hand.

Helen plunged it into the corpse’s chest—not into bone, but into the memory of flesh.

The temple dissolved into the past.

1521: The Last Sacrifice

She stood beside her ancestor in the real Chichén Itzá, watching as he prepared to sacrifice a Spanish friar.

"Wait," Helen begged. "Don’t steal his ch’ulel—"

Ah Kin Chel turned—and saw her.

For one terrible moment, past and present overlapped.

Then the friar changed—his skin sloughing away to reveal something older, its true form all jagged edges and whispering mouths.

The Ah Tz’ikbal.

"You promised me souls," it hissed through the friar’s rotting lips.

Ah Kin Chel staggered back. "This one is tainted—"

The Thing That Whispers Lies smiled. "All the better."

It leaped into the Rain-Bringer’s mouth.

The jade amulet shattered—

Present: The Cage Cracks

Helen gasped back into the present just as the temple’s ceiling split open, unleashing a downpour of living rain—each drop a wriggling, eyeless tadpole-thing.

The false father’s body exploded, releasing her real father, who collapsed at her feet.

"The amulet..." he coughed, black water gushing from his lips. "It’s not in the Well of Sacrifice... it’s in us..."

Ah Kin Chel’s corpse pointed a trembling finger at Helen’s bleeding forearm—where the serpent glyph now moved, slithering up her veins.

"The Chaac Tzat blood is the lock," the ancestor rasped. "And you just broke it."

The cenote erupted.

Something colossal and many-mouthed rose from the depths, its voice like a hurricane made of whispers:

"THANK YOU FOR THE STORM, LITTLE BRIDGE."

As the temple collapsed, Helen’s father shoved the zapote dagger into her hands.

"The only way to cage it again..."

...is to become what your ancestor was.

A Rain-Bringer.

A thief of souls.

A monster.

Outside, across the Yucatán, every cenote began to boil.

CHAPTER 6: THE RAIN-BRINGER'S CHOICE

The world was ending in whispers.

Helen stood at the edge of the boiling cenote, the zapote dagger trembling in her hands. Behind her, the jungle screamed—not with animal cries, but with human voices, thousands of them, as the Ah Tz’ikbal’s influence spread through the groundwater, turning every raindrop into a tiny, chattering mouth.

Her father knelt in the mud, his body wasting away as the last of his stolen ch’ulel leaked from his pores.

"You have to choose now," he gasped. "The old way... or nothing."

The Ah Tz’ikbal’s voice slithered up from the depths, sweet as rotting honey:

"OR YOU COULD LET ME GO, LITTLE BRIDGE. LET ME FILL THE SKY WITH TRUTHS NO ONE WANTS TO HEAR."

The water at Helen’s feet rippled, showing her visions of what that would mean:

—A man in Mérida clawing his ears out as the rain whispered his wife’s infidelities—

—A child drinking tap water only to vomit up live scorpions that spelled her darkest thoughts—

—The entire Yucatán peninsula sinking into the aquifer as the cenotes giggled—

The dagger grew heavier.

Ah Kin Chel’s corpse stood at her shoulder, reeking of wet feathers and betrayal. "The ritual requires three things," he rasped. "A vessel. A storm. And a lie so beautiful it drowns the truth."

He pointed to her father. "His body is the vessel."

To the hurricane-black sky. "The storm is coming."

Then to Helen’s chest. "The lie must be yours."

Her father looked up, his four eyes brimming with black tears. "Do it. Make them believe it’s over."

The first raindrop hit her forehead.

It whispered her mother’s last words before the cancer took her: "Don’t let them make you cruel."

Helen raised the dagger—

—and plunged it into her own heart.

The Last Lie

Pain exploded, then blossomed.

Her blood hit the water, and the cenote shuddered, its surface forming a perfect, still mirror.

Ah Tz’ikbal’s many mouths pressed against the other side, hungry.

Helen spoke through the pain: "I give you my ch’ulel freely. No theft. No bargain."

A stunned silence. The Thing That Whispers Lies had never been given truth before—only stolen it.

She continued, each word dripping red into the water: "The Chaac Tzat never caged you. We worshipped you. The amulet wasn’t a lock—it was an altar. You were never trapped... you were fed."

The lie was exquisite. The Ah Tz’ikbal writhed with pleasure.

"MORE," it begged.

Helen smiled with bloody teeth. "And now I’ll feed you forever."

She tore the dagger upward, splitting her sternum—

—and her father leaped into the opening, his body dissolving into smoke as he carried the lie inside her ribcage.

"The vessel," Ah Kin Chel intoned.

Lightning struck the cenote.

"The storm."

Helen’s heartbeat stuttered as the Ah Tz’ikbal rushed into her chest, eager to nest in the hollow where her truth had been.

"The lie."

The water stilled.

The rain stopped mid-fall.

And Helen Morales, last of the Chaac Tzat, became something new.

EPILOGUE: THE NEW RAIN

Three days later, a child in Valladolid looked up as the first real storm in centuries rolled across the Yucatán.

The raindrops tasted like salt and jade.

Far below, in the secret cenotes, the Wayob whispered of a woman who walked the sacbe roads at night, her chest cavity blooming with black orchids.

Sometimes she stopped travelers to ask a single question:

"What is the most beautiful lie you’ve ever told?"

And if the answer pleased her, she would press a skeletal finger to their lips—

—and for the rest of their lives, the rain would never whisper their secrets back to them.

In Mérida, an old h’men’s skin hung empty on his chair, his bones scattered across the floor like tzite seeds after a divination.

The last mark in the dust formed a single glyph:

"She walks."

And in Xibalba, the Lords of the Underworld drank from cups made of fingernails, their hollow eyes turned upward—

—waiting for the day their new sister in the world above grew tired of her cage.

But for now?

Let it rain.

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